What I think the comments from classmates

I thought that my slides were simple to show who I am, so I had to put more pictures the first slide and the last one. While presentation, I should have looked at everyone and spoken more loudly. Although I was satisfied with my first presentation, I found that I had to improve my presentation after reading comments by everyone.

The good thing is putting many pictures, so I will put many pictures next presentation.

Considering watchers, I should make my slides more colorful.